Score: 4

"What's Going On Here?"

submission: Holy Bibble.Genesis 20:1

date: April 7, 2009

It seriously would have helped a lot if there were an intro or at least some instructions or something so players knew what they were supposed to be doing.

The graphics were nice, though.

Score: 3

"What were you looking for?"

submission: The Chinese Knight: Rpg

date: April 3, 2009

Well, the character sprite seems pretty nice, but there's no plot, no sound, not really any point.
What I mean is, there's so little game here that I don't get why you thought you needed to submit this- it's not as though any of us can really give you much constructive feedback, given what we can experience of the game.

So, for what it's worth: nice character sprite, but the inventory box is way too big/inconveniently located. I couldn't say whether I'd be interested in the finished product, since there's no storyline or gameplay to consider.

Score: 5

"Okay"

submission: late!!

date: March 21, 2009

I love text adventures, and this is a moderately decent one.

Pros: Decent amount of text per page, the choices are sensible rather than random and appear to lead to mostly reasonable conclusions.

(Perhaps out of your control) Cons: No pictures or music. I might have been able to get past that if the story had been more interesting.

Straight-up Cons: Poor choice of font and colors makes reading somewhat annoying. With four writers, unless you are all non-native English speakers, you ought to have been able to avoid the grammar mistakes.

Overall: a nice first effort, hopefully you keep working on it.