Score: 4

"What's Going On Here?"

submission: Holy Bibble.Genesis 20:1

date: April 7, 2009

It seriously would have helped a lot if there were an intro or at least some instructions or something so players knew what they were supposed to be doing.

The graphics were nice, though.

Score: 3

"What were you looking for?"

submission: The Chinese Knight: Rpg

date: April 3, 2009

Well, the character sprite seems pretty nice, but there's no plot, no sound, not really any point.
What I mean is, there's so little game here that I don't get why you thought you needed to submit this- it's not as though any of us can really give you much constructive feedback, given what we can experience of the game.

So, for what it's worth: nice character sprite, but the inventory box is way too big/inconveniently located. I couldn't say whether I'd be interested in the finished product, since there's no storyline or gameplay to consider.

Score: 5

"Okay"

submission: late!!

date: March 21, 2009

I love text adventures, and this is a moderately decent one.

Pros: Decent amount of text per page, the choices are sensible rather than random and appear to lead to mostly reasonable conclusions.

(Perhaps out of your control) Cons: No pictures or music. I might have been able to get past that if the story had been more interesting.

Straight-up Cons: Poor choice of font and colors makes reading somewhat annoying. With four writers, unless you are all non-native English speakers, you ought to have been able to avoid the grammar mistakes.

Overall: a nice first effort, hopefully you keep working on it.

Score: 7

"Pretty fun"

submission: Way Of The Tangram

date: March 16, 2009

I liked it, but a lot of times, I would have the shape made, and the game refused to recognize it until I used the "shape" hint to put the pieces exactly where the game felt they ought to be.

Also the "yay" sound effect is kinda annoying, but the bg music is nice.

Score: 9

"Yay! Bomee made a new game!"

submission: Dating Sim Academy

date: March 14, 2009

I love how the characters have actual storylines when you talk to them, unlike traditional dating sims where the npc repeats the same four or five phrases over and over.

I've played enough Bomee games now to realize that seemingly "broken" links usually just mean you're missing an item- but it would still be nice to get some kind of confirmation. I didn't realize at first that clicking "gift" from the npc talk page would tell me what items I needed for the date. (Since usually that link just lets you give items to the npc.)

I love all Bomee's sims- they're consistently funny, cute, and sweet. The mouse-drawn art really grows on you after a while, too.

Can't wait for another one!

(Wasn't Air the name of a character from another game?)

Score: 7

"Game not glitched- pretty good difference game"

submission: The Art Detective

date: March 12, 2009

To the user who got the "game not available" message: I got that too- it's the loading screen's ad that is glitched. When the loading bar fills under the Gamejacke ad, don't click the "play" button. Just wait another minute and the actual game will come up.

There have been several difference games lately on NG- it's cool that this one uses real artwork.

Score: 0

"Zero Rating due to inability to finish game"

submission: Detective Hearst Case 01

date: February 27, 2009

When the game asks "Do you know who the murderer is?" clicking on the "yes" link takes you to a Newgrounds error page saying that the portal cannot be found.

I can't really rate the game if it can't be completed.